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Aranid писал(а):
Hi dear girls!
I try to learn english, but i dont have a practice.
Today I found this top and I hope to get some practice with my english.
I'm sorry for my mistackes, I wish you show its for me Embarassed
Have a nice day for everybody Romashki

Aranid, I live in the USA and I also speak fluent Russian. I can help you by helping you fix your errors in your sentences. So the first sentence you wrote was :

"I try to learn English,but I don't have a practice."
The word "a" is usually used for a thing. Like "a bike", "a person", "a toy". But practice is not a thing . Practice is action(also known as verb) Also "I try to learn..." can be said this way:"I am trying to learn English." So you can just write your sentence this way: "I am trying to learn English, but I don't have enough practice.(tut mojna skazat enough chtobi sebya abyesnit':enough aznochayet dostatachna)

"Today I found this top and I hope to get some practice with my English."
I'm not quite sure what you meant by "top"....but you can say theme for tyema. That's the only mistake I found here..

"I'm sorry for my mistackes,I wish you show it's for me."
Mistackes is spelled incorrectly. The right spelling : mistakes. You started the second half of the sentence with an "I".That makes it a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is a "sentence" that continue's. (I have a site that teaches russian, Embarassed ) It's means "it is". So basically you don't need to put it there. The correct sentence structure(pravelniy vit predlajeniya ) : "I'm sorry for my mistakes. I wish that you could show them to me."

And at last the last sentence "Have a nice day for everybody."
You can simply say "Have a nice day everyone", otherwise ,it sounds like you're saying "C Rojdectvom Hristovim dlya vseh."
I hope this was helpful. If you need help....you know where to go! girl_flag_of_truce Rose
Have a great day! girl_bye2

 
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